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A proud shinobi
head held high
one day leaving
without saying goodbye
Bent on revenge
and nothing else
He craves for power
without a dout
When he leaves
his heart is sore
his mind is weak
and much much more
A proud shinobi
head held high
one day leaving
without saying goodbye
His friends all hope
for his return
he wont come back
he wont come home
A wanted ninja
returns one day
for the one he loves
she's passed away
And then he find's
that his own hands
have caused a death he didn't plan.
- Title: A Proud Shinobi
- Artist: Utena Ido
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Description:
A poem I wrote while sitting in bed and I couln't get to sleep.
~enjoy~ - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: shinbi sasuke ninja
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Heather Lush - 07/16/2008
- Great poem. Much better than the first of your's I saw on here. A bit of punctuation and spelling corrections could help, but otherwise, I really liked it.
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- XX-Emma Uchiha-XX - 07/16/2008
- This is such a nice poem! Especially for a sitting-in-bed-not-able-to-sleep poem! 5/5
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- OMGLAVASAUR - 07/16/2008
- u wrote this wenu couldnt go to sleep WOW!! (in a good way)
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- Utena Ido - 07/16/2008
- It is ^-^
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- Casca 7 - 07/16/2008
- aww. it's like Sasuke sort of...
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