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I wish I could stay here
Right here alone,
With my thoughts of love
My thoughts of home.
The dreams I have
The dreams I long for,
Are the dreams that were once
But not anymore.
Ive lost all hope
Im out of my mind,
Becuase my love for you
Is all so blind.
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- by LeatherFae |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: I Wish
- Artist: LeatherFae
- Description: I wrote this a long time ago when I was in highschool and had just had my heart broken.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: love lost brokenheart
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Celestial Bride - 12/25/2011
- Real emotion in this Adding to favorites biggrin 5/5
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- Black Ravenz - 07/30/2009
- aweshome,completely great,reminds of me
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- Klaora - 12/20/2008
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From what I've read of this atrocious arena, this is by far one of the best. (A few apostrophes would help, but other than that, I've no complaints.) THANK YOU FOR CAPITALIZATION, PUNCTUATION, RHYTHM, RHYME, AND PUTTING SOME ACTUAL THOUGHT INTO YOUR WORK! You've restored some of my hope in this category. Thank you!
Also, very nice poem. =3 - Report As Spam
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