Punished

• Artist: Ace-of-Evil
• Description: This is a song I made up for the beta testing for the writing arena.
• Date: 07/17/2008
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Punished.


Why did I accept that apoligy. 'Cause I know, You never ment it at all! I thought that would be the end but I mis-numbered it up! I wish you had another chance but you don't. 'Cause its to late baby, Whoa! Its to bad you blew it, I was starting to like you but no, No, Nowhoawhoa. Because I think that, You should always, be punished. We know that, you don't deserve me.

1, 2, 3, 4! Why did I accept that apoligy in the first place
'cause I know you never ment it at all! Whoa!

I thought that would be the end but I mis-numbered it up! Numbered it up!
Why did you make me cry?

Why did I accept that apoligy. 'Cause I know, You never ment it at all! Whoa. I thought that would be the end but I mis-numbered it up! Numbered it up! Whoa. Because I think that, You should always, be punished. We know that, you never deserved me, ever.

Comments

[AlliBalli52]

I think it was very creative and witty. I say it is a 5/5! Keep up the good work!

[CarlosV-Lobos]

Paramore-ish

[X___Murder Muffins]

You should probably check your spelling before you enter something next time. I'll give you 3/5

[UnTiTlEdDiSaStErZz]

I liked it, kind of short but liked it!!!!! And just for the FANTASTIC effort i give u 5 *****.... biggrin

[Ace-of-Evil]

Hi, I know its not that goo but I'm not that good at song writing either so bare with me please. Please vote fairly and I hope you like it.