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Sunset's arriving quickly.
You better get home swiftly.
Don't look at me with sorrow.
Will you be here tomorrow?
The day has ended again.
But for today, there is rain.
Seeing you march and follow,
Will you be here tomorrow?
War befallen upon these towns.
Us with our own ups and downs.
No more glancing, you follow.
Will you be here tomorrow?
I see the glaze in your eyes.
I am no longer your prize.
To you, I am now hollow.
Will you be here tomorrow?
The sky is painted dark red.
Our so-called love is now dead.
My tears are filled with sorrow.
You'll not be here tomorrow...
- Title: Will You Be Here Tomorrow?
- Artist: mintages
- Description: Hmmm... I really wanted to get into some weird scene in my head of a soldier and his true love and how they would fare when he left for war. I thought of it two years ago when one of my classes were debating over the Iraq War... Could war truly change love, I asked myself...? Here is the product of my wondering....
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: love soldier
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Comments (4 Comments)
- jirouu - 07/18/2008
- its really nice ^__^
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- taisamustang29 - 07/18/2008
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That's really a gorgeous poem. I mean it. <33
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- Elora Corrass - 07/17/2008
- I really like it, and I can really understand where you're coming from. Good job!
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- Im Drowning - 07/17/2008
- nice
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