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They'd always look at my skin
And never at what lies within
They'd say she's an idiot look at her
As if they didn't know how much it hurt
Sometimes there is nowhere I belong
And me and my friends never get along
- by Pure Water Fairy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: It Hurts
- Artist: Pure Water Fairy
- Description: This is a poem about how I am teased at school because people say I am ugly
- Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xX-MelGal-Xx - 03/20/2009
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Don't listen to that rubbish!
I liked your poem and an emote was creative and cute. - Report As Spam
- Pure Water Fairy - 07/19/2008
- the emote is how i felt about the poem
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- Ija Jonas - 07/18/2008
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i dont see anything wrong by putting the emote..
anyways, dont care about what other people says just know that everybody is beautiful in their own ways - Report As Spam
- Taking Tea In Dreamland - 07/17/2008
- The emote really destoyed the poem. D:
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- Gaisus - 07/17/2008
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I like it.
But I agree with Mareal, though. The emote threw it off. - Report As Spam
- demon strait outta_hell - 07/17/2008
- Marael is way wrong, emotions are the building blocks of poetry. i liked it.
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- Marael - 07/17/2008
- Don't use emotes in poetry, hon... sad
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