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The One Thing Beyond my dreams...
Every sleepless night i stare at my window,
I see nothing but you,
When i dream i see you,
Youve been the dream in my heart,
When im lonely
,All i have to do is think of you,
Not the greatest image,
But its something special,
To remind me t also dream big,
This dream which comes every night,
Will not be forever forgotten,
And thats the dream i draem each night.
- Title: The one thing beyond my dreams
- Artist: Ueto Ara
- Description: Another story...another pooem
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: dream love poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Fredella - 07/18/2008
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it's nice ^^
a few spelling errors, but that's alright! smile
this is how i felt when i used to have a huge crush on one of my senior about 2 years ago for 21 months...
and so, i'll give it 5/5! XD - Report As Spam
- Meth Related Nightmare - 07/18/2008
- Lots of errors, not much attention to meter and rhyme. 1/5
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- Death=Peace - 07/18/2008
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Good poem, has some errors but thats just from probably typing so fast lol
^_^ - Report As Spam