Rift in time

• Artist: Nightmare Zodiac
• Description: This is about a young girl who was both deaf and a great friend. She died and this is about reaching to her trying to talk to her and hear her voice and for her to hear mine and then waking up from a dream and finding you've lost all hope of seeing her again.
  
  Please enjoy the poem and when reading it think of all the deaf or blind people who you know or know of.
  
  Thanks for looking.
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: death rift time mime talking

Standing on a rift in time,
We cannot talk, only mime.

breaking through, just in reach,
so close to you, the gift of speech.

Feel you there, by my side.
This first time, I have cried.

you hear me now, I am sure.
I will love you forever more.

Stardust fills your quiet eyes,
severing our happy ties.

And with a breath your gone from sight
and I've lost you into the night.

Falling from the rift in time,
We cannot talk, no longer mime.

Comments

[Nightmare Zodiac]

Okay. clearing something up. Amanda was born part deaf. she could speak slightly. But an operation on her ear went wrong a completely deafened her. So we used a form of sign language to talk. I never heard her speak. this poem is about reaching out to her and in the next realm, whether that be an after life or Heaven, shes cured and we could have a normal conversation.... Its sort of mixed emotions about what I felt when she died and imagined might happen. It is a bit confusing.

[rin1782]

I'm confused if shes deaf she cant hear so is she mute?

[xXxXxbabexXxXx]

very nice....ty for the discription.....without it i was a lil cunfused