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• Artist: Miss Chuck Almighty
• Description: This isn't a song. This isn't an AA BB AA CC kind of poem. This is raw emotion. The kind that doesn't need the editorial process. The kind that will never be perfect, but can still shake you just a bit. This is writing from the center of my being. Even if you don't like, please treat it with respect.. ~ChucK~
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: notitlepoem

I sing a song that has no words.
I play a tune with no melody.
I am the song that only you could stomach to listen to.
You torture your eyes to look at something you call beauty
And torment your ears with the voice you say comforts you.
Everyday I believe you.
Even when it seems I don't believe your words
Or push them aside because the bad is easier to believe than the good,
I keep them safe in my memory.
Safe from decay of reality.
You bring out sides of me that I dare not show anybody else.
Pieces of my shattered soul that I hold in close
In fear of others discovering me.
I am not afraid anymore.
I sing a song I wrote for you.
I play a tune no one else deserves.

Comments

[NakedJack]

The description is a crock of s**t, but the poem is ok. I like it in the sense that I don't hate it. That is saying alot considering I'm revolted by the context.

[ninja-kyoko-chan]

the best poems are just things you write down; as you said, raw emotion
perhaps if others were to say its just something that has no value, you could rhyme it AFTER you write, and still get the same effect
all in all, a very good poem. 5/5

[Miss Chuck Almighty]

Oh, I didn't mean it like that..
I simply meant to imply it's raw emotion that just splattered itself on the page..
I'll fix it..

[kada-chu]

I agree, very nicely written.
However, I don't think you've the right to imply that songs and rhyming poems lack emotion. But, to each their own.

[OutOfThinAir]

Wow! Its really good! I like it!

[MyfriendsareDohnuts]

I love the poem and I haven't even read all of it yet....5 stars. I'm in the writing arena's too. Good luck hope you do well.