fear of the heart

• Artist: ii-jhenny-ii
• Description: this is the first good peom i wrote
  lots of my poems r dedecated to my sister tammy, a movie i saw, or a book i read. this one is sorta like all put togeter
  
  
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: fearoftheheartbrokenwolflustlove

the moon was bright in the sky
and there she was
running through the forest of the night
bloody feet
thoughts of fear
the3 image in her head
his bright white tail
with a duty that will not fail
trembling, bleeding with fear
remembering all she use to feel
love and efections
happyness and free
his bright red eyes
that use to be sweet
his long silky hair
his hard
sharp
claws
his bright white teeth


as tears
comes from her brown eyse that light with the moon
she stop
lookin mazed
there they stand
face-to-face



trough the woods
i hear a cry
of a poor girl
that died
and you ask
the reasson why
because of a monster
a lover
a guy.

Comments

[DubstepRaverGirl]

wow this is so good. defiantly going to my faves

[claudine14]

i enjoyed this alot! Great imagery biggrin

[jollyrancher56]

It's great and though voting has ended, being that this was submitted two years ago, I will stay add the flaws of this fairly well written poem: spelling, capitalization.

[Little Egypt kk]

It was amazing. I could really see it in my head! 5/5

[itachisbestfriend644]

omg it is good!!! im like gettin all sad and emotional! XD 5/5

[eunibutts]

awesume :]