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Violent, harshly said words of pain,
Shattered and lost in the bitter rain,
Sad and alone with no place to turn,
Fire at the heart starts to burn,
Flickering, growing brighter and brighter,
Darkness lets up, all gets lighter,
Silence breaks as a tear falls,
You know you love him, kindness calls,
Temper growing, never budge,
Will not let go of your grudge,
Spirit souls begin to race,
Quickening the slow pace,
Sharp pain, sudden, quick to come,
Growing, unknown where it’s from,
Death approaching, growing near,
It’s not that which makes me fear,
Never got to say goodbye,
Leaving like this, how can I?
See his face, pain release,
Now I can rest in peace.
- by animeXgal101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Argument of Death
- Artist: animeXgal101
- Description: Pretty much this poem I wrote is about a girl who loves a guy who has a grudge because of something he did. This girl is ill and knows she is going to die. Then the guy comes to see her and she feels better and dies. Kind of depressing but most of my poetry is sad.
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: death love sadness argument pain
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Comments (6 Comments)
- insane_undead - 12/22/2009
- nice one
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- DragonFly-Tattoo - 07/18/2008
- that's amazing! better than mine was! mine diddn't even rhyme!
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- Crystalinemoon - 07/18/2008
- Aww I love it, I like depressing ^^.
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- PiXiE_l0VE - 07/18/2008
- IT'S SO NICE ;]
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- 3m0azngurl - 07/18/2008
- i luved it. i though it was great! i though it had so much feeling! i think it was totally awesome! hey read mine... there kinda gay but still... its smiles fade and crying out. well luv ur poam and i hope to read more of ur work!
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- Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind - 07/18/2008
- It's sad and beautiful. I love it. 4/5.
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