Let it go

• Artist: Your lost angel
• Description: uhm...did it randomly
• Date: 07/19/2008
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Sometimes i think that i should just stop pretending
to everyones life there is always and ending
so maybe i should just stop lieing
to tell everyone that i am dieing
Maybe i should just let it go
Maybe i should stay quiet so no one will know
Maybe it will end happily some day
i know it will have to end some way
maybe this love that i wish for will come knocking at my door
or maybe i wont feel for love anymore
because this love kills me
and if only you could see

Comments

[Rei Kuroniko]

Good poem, The key to a good poem is the expression of human emotion. And yet that is what many poems lack, If you express your self well enough it doesn't even have to ryme, So let the creative juices flow!!! don't be afraid to put emotion into writing, Bravo. Looking forward to your next poem,

sthurnau009

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

i really like it. 5/5

[Banana The Pichu]

5/5