I can't think of a title :(

• Artist: Zajas
• Description: Just a little poem I wrote on the spot, it kinda says what I've felt for a while about a certain stupidity of mine that happened a while back, and it's also a call for others to just open up and lay it on the line.
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: love

To love, of which, this heart has not
I hope, I wish, my life won't stop
'til love for me, my heart has found
'nd my love for one, my life is bound

For a chance at love, my life once had
, but ignorance gladly took from my hand,
the chance at happiness, true and glad
with the one, that was right, for this man.

So to all who search, and all who can't see,
give your life to love, and what it can be,
to help those around you, and to be free,
to love those around you, try it and see.

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

Really good. Some of my poems are like this. They don't make much sense to anyone else but me and people who read them are like "what the hell....?" haha....my silly little self...

Comment and Rate back??

[Cathedral Az]

It's beautiful and I certainly see where you're coming from. It's wonderful.

[KoolBeansBabee]

Oh my god.. that is amazing.
you should get that published! im seroius
you should keep writting poems, your very talented.
i give you 5-stars.

[Zajas]

I suppose it makes more sense to the one who wrote it, because to be honest it is a little vague. So, no need to be sorry, that's my own doing. Also, if you read this please comment, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

[CrayonDoodles]

it pretty much doesn't make any sense.. sweatdrop

Sorry!!