"God Forsaken Hell"

• Artist: anime_freak_kouga
• Description: I wrote this beginning of June 2008. I don't really have much else to say about it.
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: forsaken pain

"God Forsaken Hell"

Pushed, Kicked, Shoved,
It's what happens to me all the time,
Ripped of my inner being,
All I am good at is fleeing.

I am picked at until nothing is left,
Nothing but a small pathetic human,
Hide, hiding from the world is what I do,
Who am I? I have no clue.

Suppressing my feelings,
Not telling anyone what's really on my mind,
I am not aloud to speak,
For if I do, I become very weak.

I scream for help,
But nobody seems to hear me,
What the heck is wrong?
I just can't seem to stay strong.

I am alone, nobody seems to notice me,
If you see that petty person in a corner,
Then that's me, or at least my shell,
I am utterly alone in this god forsaken hell.




~Anime Freak

Comments

[emeraldpuppy9]

i <3 it 5/5 =]

[Mistress Skadi]

The words are original, but the feelings and ideas you portray are everyone's at some point in their lives. (4/5)

[jirouu]

amazing biggrin

[coreycloud]

very good i like it

[The_Informative]

wao amazing

[Zajas]

I totally know the feeling, grade school was literally my hell sometimes. (bullies suck) Eventually you'll get over such things that make life suck, but it's something that takes time. Just know that you're not alone. (5/5)

[reapersuns manfriend]

Well, besides it being alittle demented, it wasn't all too bad. I don't get why you would use more than one question mark though. Perhaps you should re-think that. It looks very amateur to do so. Nevertheless, a 4/5. ^^