Impact

• Artist: Akumu_Nakamura
• Description: just my favorite poem i wrote from my poetry packet.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: impactcollisionsafety

Faster than light it comes,
Smashing into me.
Impact.

Crying out,
A loud screech in the night.
Collision.

Sirens blaring,
Hurried feet.
Safety.


-Andrea

Comments

[The Master Demonslayer]

I agree with Menek, but your style has some future potential.

[reapersuns manfriend]

Overly used cliches.
Keep trying.