Crash

• Artist: Braesin Ousama Tosen
• Description: My internal rush of thoughts that went through my mind
  when me and my eternal love "made it official".
  
  Please any suggestions, comments or even personal experiences: feel free to share.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: love crash saiyko move

Crash. They all come back

like messenger pigeons with a CALLING in life.

Instant recalling…Remembering?

Images of past evens CRASHING

As she types those words:

“Are we Official?”

She asks. They ask. They want to know.

THEY have to KNOW.

Trampoline. Pillows. Candy.

Her babies name is candy

Sweetest dog in the world. And now

How to reply? Love is in the air

Everywhere I look around fiery passion ABLAZE

YES YES. yes is how I answered.

In reverse we flew and now we have landed
On cranium only. How to express myself.

I look down at the joint of the palm:

Her love was the dam to my crimson seas.

I turn away as the curtains close to the

OPERA stage.

End scene.

The memories

Set sail. The chain breaks. Past loves are

Like dents.

Pretend. That didn’t just happen.

MOVE on.

Move on.

Comments

[Gravetye]

I definitely like this. I think it's interesting how you put certain words in all caps--it really makes your poem stand out. I also really enjoyed the free flow of it and your unique way of describing memories of past relationships. 5/5

[Hollister Holocaust]

I like how it illustrates the illogical rush of emotion in that kind of situation, its pretty good.

[Braesin Ousama Tosen]

Thanks im glad you enjoyed it and i really do try and let myself bleed onto the paper.

[mkjhfd]

my favourite kind of poetry is this one, when u just let the pen write watever ur thinking... it happends to me a lot

[Braesin Ousama Tosen]

thanks guys.

[The Master Demonslayer]

Whoa, that was interesting beyond the norm.

[Neomifox]

Wow...That made me think...