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Too Late to Fly
All alone,
Never leaves,
The web she has spun herself.
Fool her once,
She hides away.
Never leaving,
No one enters.
Folded,
Crying,
Suffocating,
In her conjured container.
Every inch towards the door,
The rope tightens,
She pulls,
She tugs.
Her perfect chance,
She tries to fly,
Her wings are useless,
They never truly grew.
She sits,
Alone,
In the dark,
In her eternal cocoon.
- by UBER_LOOZER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: Too Late to Fly
- Artist: UBER_LOOZER
- Description: smzdghmd,f,khjmgf
- Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: rawr
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Comments (5 Comments)
- spycoo16 - 07/22/2008
- WOW I thinmk the ending was the deepest part -faves-(Again)
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- Beautifully Broken Smile - 07/21/2008
- Odd yet intriguing. o.o; <3 :]
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- Atheshya - 07/21/2008
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I like this, it's got unusual subject matter and it's just... interesting. My suggustion is to take of the commas at the end of the lines - it would look much better without them.
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- LadiieLove. - 07/21/2008
- Something about it made me like it.
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- leahguyy - 07/21/2008
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huh. weird, but I likee itt. ^.^ fiivve. you seem to write a lot. :Þ
see mine.? ._.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100010665
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