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The rush,
Surge of pain,
The shot of adrenaline.
The pill,
The cure for my sorrow,
The band aid on my wound.
The drug,
My addiction,
Continuous as my breath.
My pill,
My rush,
My drug,
My End.
- by UBER_LOOZER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: The Cure
- Artist: UBER_LOOZER
- Description: i had to write poetry for school...ugh
- Date: 07/21/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- spycoo16 - 07/22/2008
- Although you may have put in the description "Ugh" I think its short yet meaningful all at the same time yu can feel you were coming from somewhere with this 5 STARS!!!
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- Ninjutsuninja - 07/21/2008
- I feel a strong emotion coming from it, which is good. However, the poem lacks substance, it feels VERY forced. Take another stab at it, and I'm sure you'll have yourself a lovely little slice of wonderful ^_^
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- Atheshya - 07/21/2008
- There's not much here. It's not horrible, but I can't find anything good about it either.
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