escape

• Artist: iMhEaVeNsOnLyDeViL
• Description: jsuzx sumthing i put 2getha
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: escapewantblah

I WANT TO ESCAPE
MY OWN SECRET OAIS
WHERE NO SUCH THING AS PAIN EXISTS
WHERE NO ONE CAN BOTHER
THERES NO CRYING
THERES ONLY SMILES
NO HATE
JUST LOVE
SO I WONDER WHERES MY TICKET
HOW CAN I GET THERE
AND HOW SOON
WHERE RIGHT IS RIGHT
AND WRONG IS WRONG
NO ARGUEMENTS
JUST A PEACEFUL BLISS
SO I ASK
TAKE ME AWAY
A SECRET PLACE
TAKE ME AWAY
A HIDING PLACE
TAKE ME AWAY
TO BETTER DAYS
TAKE ME AWAY
A SWEET ESCAPE
NO PIT STOPS JUST A STRAIGHT AWAY SHOT
PASS THE BOMBS OF HATRED
PASS THE SHOWERS OF TEARS
AND INTO THE LAND OF HAPPINESS
DEEP INTO THE RAINBOW
SOMEWHERE WHERE DOVES CANT CRY
BEYOND THE MISERY
BEYOND THE FAKENESS OF REAL LIFE
AND INTO MY OWN LITTLE PIECE OF HAPPINESS
LOST IN A CROWD OF DESPAIR
NEVER TO BE FOUND
WHY CANT SOMEONE JUST TAKE ME AWAY

Comments

[Fruitcake Sunbae]

Put together with bits and pieces of another artist's song, and in all caps. I'd say it isn't worth rating, but I would love to give you a 1/5. So, off I go.

[SakuraHaruno5121]

i thought this is a song called 'a sweet escape' .did you copied it?? anyway,3/5

[Ricochetra]

Interesting...It doesn't have much of a beat,but you portrayed your meaning wonderfully.

[Knight154]

Strange with all caps but not a bad poem

[Beautifully Broken Smile]

I thought it was interesting. Although I may suggest you change "real life" to "reality" forth line up from the bottom. But overall I liked it :]

[Atheshya]

WHY for the love of God is this in all caps? I'm rating this one star, would probobly be higher if you turned the caps lock off.