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Blue of the seas
Blue of the wave
tell me it isn’t
the end of the world
The tears flew by
into the great big ocean
Our pain within
is part of the ocean
Soaking Blue
where no rain can touch
Saltwater penetrates
into my mouth
We cannot breathe
The sun sets into the sea
The waters turn their own
shade of Orange
with the Blue,
Blue below
The tears flew by
into my mouth
Our world is breaking
until the shadows are made of light
A song breaks the water
and a dolphin sees us through
our beluga cries are answered
from the Blue
as the jellyfish disperse
we go further down
as humanity has done before
Oh, when the diaphanous
translucent beings
of what as once a light sun
turn me into the dark sun…
Blue upon Blue
Sinking further
We cannot breathe
The black does not matter
The sun cannot reach
So it is light
and we are entangled
in the arms
of the Blue, Blue
Orange.
- Title: Blue
- Artist: Atheshya
- Description: I'm not entirely sure what this one's even about.
- Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: blue seas drowning
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Raziel Nephilim - 06/02/2009
- I agree with copperius, it almost made sense in some obscure way, then I got lost further into it.It sounds like despair.The dolphin could be hope,or an answer that still is drowned out by hopelesness or regret or something like that.
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- HUMIDIFIER - 07/22/2008
- i couldn't tell you what this is about either. but you know what? a lot of musicians couldn't tell you what their music is about. painters can't always explain what their paintings are about. there's too much to read into it, but i like that. i like some of the images. and blue is a nice color. bang up job, dearie.
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- BETALOVER_96 - 07/21/2008
- I feel that it COULD be god but it just isn't. One star. Sound familiar? I hated the whole thing!!!! X(
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- xXxXxbabexXxXx - 07/21/2008
- blue,blue orange................ya that makes sense........i give a 1..........
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- copperius - 07/21/2008
- pretty good right up to the end. Then you lost me
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/21/2008
- colorful with a small injection of emo.i like how its all like "blue, blue,blue,...Orange."lol. not bad. check mine out. i enjoy critisism
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