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Five bird eggs,
Four of them hatch.
Three of them duck eggs,
Two unknown.
'Why is this'
You might be asking.
One did not hatch,
The other...
That is up to you.
- by mommyissniffer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: What do you think?
- Artist: mommyissniffer
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Description:
i felt like doing this cuz i think im bad at poetry and wanted to know if u think otherwise...just plz dont say im dumb...
~mommyissniffer - Date: 07/22/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- vardo5 - 01/03/2009
- i don't think you're dumb at all. And i like your little poem. Hatching eggs is an interesting subject/metaphor i suppose.
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- mommyissniffer - 11/26/2008
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thats the first ACCURATE poem ive ever done. XD - Report As Spam
- mkjhfd - 07/23/2008
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...i dont know wat to say
ive never read poetry about eggs...
but its not bad
u just have to explore the theme a little bit more.. smile - Report As Spam
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