A Drug Called LIFE

• Artist: Ryota Elias Librae
• Description: This is a peom i wrote all the poems i write come from how i am feeking that day or in general.
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: life

There is a drug in this world that is so addicting and so tough to fight that one sniff, puff, or hit could kill you in the future. Some people say they are high off this drug other say they wish it never happened. Me I did this drug once and have been trying to fight it ever since but I am starting to give up and let it yake over me this drug is even worse than all the others put together this drug is called LIFE and its tough.

Comments

[Reloadead]

OK STFU. It's poetry to him, so deal with it. Can't people be nice for once?

[MusicalSorrows]

1: punctuation dude!!
2: stanzas
3: so not poetry
4:SPELLING
5: so not rating this

[Angelisa]

this is poetry?!...*laughs loudly*

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

LAME! a) it's an idiotic stament overall. heroin kills.life is killed. b) not poetry at all. poetry has stanzas and metaphors and other literary devices. go back to second grade

[pinkpunk91]

it dosent matter wat she thinks i love it i think it sutes u. i know it sutes me.

[HUMIDIFIER]

this is not poetry, it's a run on sentence. there's nothing interesting in it, and when you think you've dropped the hammer in BOOM CAPSLOCK it's not really carrying any weight. also, there isn't one sign that you thought about this for more than a minute.