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she makes the - lone wolves - bark at the moon
because they hear her cries
and with the sound of her songs - the sun-lit eavening dies
she knows - that she - is not alone -
but she feels - that she even isnt fully grown -
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and i am no -- one- to try...
i am no one made of wings to fly
she tell's the sky...
but i dont kno why.......
she makes the - lone wolves - bark at the moon
when they hear her cries
and with the sound of her songs - the sun-lit eavening dies
and then she looks at the stars - shinning in her eyes
as imitations of the moonlit skies
she knows - that she isn't alone -
but she feels - she isn't fully grown -
and she wants to be with - one of her own kind -
and her feelings are left behind -
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she wants the- old ones- to look at the moon
so they can hear the cries
of the wolves - as reflections start to fall from her eyes
she knows - that they are all alone
but she feels that she is nothing of her own...
and now she seeks to the meddows...
runs through the trees
and in the hills and by the seas...
and i am no -- one- to try...
i am no one made of wings to fly
she tell's the sky...
but i dont kno why.......
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she makes the- lone wolves- bark at the moon
when they hear her cries
and with the sound of her songs- the sun lit eavening dies
and then she looks at the stars- shinning in her eyes
as imitatiions of the moonlit skies
and she knows that she - is not alone....
but she feels - she isn't even fully grown....
and she wants to be with her own kind
and this is what she'll find....
she makes the lone wolf bark at the moon
she makes the lone wolf bark at the moon-
she makes the- lone wolves- bark at the moon
when they hear her cries
and with the sound of her songs- the sun lit eavening dies
and then she looks at the stars- shinning in her eyes
as imitatiions of the moonlit skies
she knows - that she - isn't alone -
but she feels - she isn't fully grown -
and she wants to be wich one of her kind
then her feelings are left behind -
she makes the lone wolf bark at the moon
she makes the lone wolf bark at the moon
she makes the lone wolf bark at the moon
she makes the lone wolf bark at the moon
- by Yamo Soumaru |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2008 |
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- Title: WolvenCry
- Artist: Yamo Soumaru
- Description: This is a song i wrote telling us about a human girl who lives among the wolves.. Even tho she feels an unbelonging, she will allways be one of them.. The lyrics also express humans to be the "old ones" in her view as the ones she feels is her place to be wiht and yet as the ones she wants to chnage their ways..
- Date: 07/25/2008
- Tags: wolves songs
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Comments (3 Comments)
- White Lights Reprisal - 01/01/2010
- I like it. 5/5 from me.
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- chronos phantom - 07/25/2008
- Your current poem- rate: 4/5 *'s
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- chronos phantom - 07/25/2008
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It would sound great with acoustic guitar and strings and sung by some celtic singer. Thats what I think.
Over all the poetry is decent. I have to give a fair rating. I'm also a literary critic (just a little).
I wont judge the meaning and energy of your poem though. cus that is priceless and only you know the strong points of your poetry to the fullest than any other. - Report As Spam