I said I'm sorry

• Artist: chichibaby10493
• Description: what you say doesn't allways have a strong meaning its what you do that counts
  
  sorry i cant fix some of the spelling i tried 2 but my pc isnt working 2 full capacity
• Date: 07/30/2008
• Tags: sorryisntgoodenough

I said I'm Sorry
When i first broke your Heart
I said i was sorry
When i left you for a new start
I said i was sorry
When i came back to apologize
I said i was sorry
When things when't wrong you was dromotized
And i said i was sorry
Up too now you didn't Care
Till i said sorry,
and you gave me a mean Stare
Then you said as loud as you could
Sorry isn't enough and isn't as good as it should be
So till this day i think of the way
i had lived my life those days
and the last word i should't forget
is those i used the most
The one that drove you away from me
That i still find it hard to see
how you loved me
for the last time i have to say
I am sorry for treating you that way
this is overits will never happen again
Because your part of my heart and one of my friends
Thats why i have to say i'm sorry.
heart this is trade mark and copying is not allowed also please comment and rate 5/5 heart

Comments

[Missy_Love32]

that was great even though the grammer wasnt so great ill still give you a five

[iLuvHorses7]

That was really good! 5/5

[im now mehugzu]

grammer could have been better, but i think it deserves a 4. great detail:yes
easy to understand:yes
poetic flow:yes
could become music:yes
grammer:no

[Infinityth Sairi]

It's ok, the spelling's a little off but I'll still give it a five.