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Was I a fool to have ever loved you?
To see my future in your eyes?
I was so sure, yet I was forgetting one big disguise.
That love is blind and so are we,
I hope you get what I've come to see.
Yet us will never be forever nor forgotten.
I loved you once, but in all, i must have thoughten,
That we were faithful,
You and I,
Yet this made me see that our love was a lie
- by Jen_Johnson94 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/30/2008 |
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- Title: .:Relationships: us:.
- Artist: Jen_Johnson94
- Description: Umm... i really don't know what to say. ^^' I'm not a good writer at all when it comes to poetry. Yet i tried. I wrote this about my ex-boyfriend. All my other poems are about him too. They tell of how our relationship was and some continues to another poem. I hope it's not too confusing. My friend and I kinda wrote this together.
- Date: 07/30/2008
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- hchsknights08 - 01/04/2009
- thats a little corny but its okay try to make a littla happier at the end
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- elsendor - 07/31/2008
- Not bad... :angel: I like it, though there are soooooooooo many poems about broken relationships...But hey, those are the poetic moments! :angel:
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