Unknown Lovers

• Artist: Zombii Spit
• Description: First off, the song is unfinished, of course.
  I would never let a song end abruptly like that.
  I just wanted to enter it mainly to see if it was liked.
  
  My boyfriend loves it so far, but it fails in comparison to what he's written.
  
  Just for the record, I've never actually written a complete song.
  This will be my first, once I finish it.
• Date: 08/01/2008
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Your eyes on her skin catch her attention
But they can't ever mention how
You adore her

While the smile on her face and the tone of her laughter
Stay in your head long after
She's gone

But what you can't see
And what you can't hear
Are the tears that she sheds when you disappear

Cause she wants you to love her
The way she loves you

But what she doesn't know
Is that you do

We've all made mistakes
But hers is the worst
Cause she's fallen in love and it feels like a curse

Comments

[justamanda325]

awesome wink

[ceza b]

wow, that was really good