Anna

• Artist: kiraryu1
• Description: A poem I may turn into a song one day. I wrote it for my first and possibly my closest friend anna who left. I miss her. I love her so.
• Date: 08/03/2008
• Tags: lovesorrow

Of all the people in the world
I love you the most
Of all the flowers in the world
you are the most beautiful
of all the things in the world and beyond
I hold you closer than the stars
I love you more than the night
You are more imporatant to me than my own life
wherever you go and however long your gone
even if its forever and the other side of the earth
You'll always be closest to my heart

Comments

[anhpoo]

I'm sorry to hear that :'(

[Wrathes]

Pretty loving poem, the only thing you may want to focus is your GRAMMARS!

example 1:
long your gone
your should be you're

example 2:
even if its
its should be it's

Other than that, 4/5