Unhealthy addiction

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: comment please =)
• Date: 08/05/2008
• Tags: theoverlordofamsterdam unhealthyaddiction

You’re my heroin and I’m addicted
I don’t know why, I can’t depict it
I got to stop this unhealthy addiction
if I keep it up, a life apart is my prediction
you’re always on my mind
I’m never far behind
outside your house tossing rocks at your window
i can’t understand why you don’t feel for me also
my unhealthy addiction is tearing me apart
the only way to keep you safe is to leave my life and give you my heart

Comments

[xxx lmao queen xxx]

Um.. okay lol you've named the poem well and its good that it is related to the poem! Also, its telling people that its dangerous and um like not nice (lol)

I loved the flow and rhythm at the beginning and good use of words!

One thing nearer the end it lost its rhythm so try to keep the same rhythm and rhyming all the way through but. i love the sentence "the only way to keep you safe is to leave my life and give you my heart"
Brilliant Poem 5 star