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My heart belonged to one,
but now I have just begun,
Love once true,
but only just for you,
Keep my heart
and let my tears start,
happiness,
Joy,
Hurt,
Forgiveness,
jealousy,
Eternity,
never once will I give you dishonesty,
My love,
my only love,
just keep my heart
and watch
as my innocense is lost....
- Title: Innocense lost
- Artist: Areswolf
- Description: a poem I made for a dear friend of mine...
- Date: 08/19/2008
- Tags: loveoncetrueislost
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Night Angelic - 02/04/2009
- i agree with Overworkedandunderpaid is right but it was ok so two out of five
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- Incandescent Fury - 12/14/2008
- You know that's not nice. I agree it had some mistakes but it was a nice poem, and for a friend. I think Overworkedandunderpaid is being mean, I thought it was nice, but it's not my sort of poem, three out of five I think.
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- Overworkedandunderpaid - 12/14/2008
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Why in the world is this in the spotlight? Is their something wrong with people on this site? Are they all dyslexic? You get a one for various reasons, but mainly because when I added everything up e.g spelling errors, grammatical inaccuracies and the fact that it had no rythm, it sucked. One out of five.
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