Death

• Artist: _xImortal_love
• Description: i hope u like it
  i just love to write so i though i would see what other ppl thought of my writing ty and enjoy my story
  
  
  
  
  its mainly about a girl whos day of death arrived from the least expected person her true love
• Date: 08/22/2008
• Tags: deathnegitivebetrayedpain

The night is here and no one but me is here
something touched me and that was the end for me
why did life have to be so hard why
i felt pain when there was no pain
i felt no happyness in the world
all i could thing were negitive thoughts
and all i could ask myself was
why me why me
i knew that this day would come fast
but i ignored it
the day of death
the one i loved betrayed me
my day of death has arrived

Comments

[agent x562]

whole that is so cool

[dreamii - - x]

holy wow... i love that!!! it sounds similar to my poems i wrote... but yours is really good!!