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cry i try to make her happy lift her mood.
But when she finally does talk back she is pretty rude.
Sometime's i make her laff at least i try.
I know she try's not to laff and pretends to cry.
My freind's try to make me forget about her to make me on.
What would really chere me up is if she dident think our realation ship was
a game of chess and she treat's me like a pawn.
I,m not asking for much.
But when i talk to her her words are like a fist and she just gave me a big punch.Sometimes i know&she knows i make her smile.
But she pushes me away she wants me far away like a mile.
I wish she wouldent at least judge me.
Ive asked her to be nice ive beged her i dont think i should plee.
- by MATT-ELF-REAPER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/03/2008 |
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- Title: The girl i stared at.
- Artist: MATT-ELF-REAPER
- Description: its alittle like a broken hearted love poem
- Date: 09/03/2008
- Tags: girl stared
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xx--Moonlit Misery - 12/19/2008
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it's a good peom...
needs better spelling & punctuation...
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- I_Love_cookies_1996 - 10/10/2008
- matt, u know I know that it is good, is it bout monica? u did a AWESOME job, I hope u relize soon, thanks 4 always being there! : )
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- Misty Marina - 09/04/2008
- Not bad. The lines for the rhymes need to be set up better, but other wise good~
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- iUgly_Cupcake - 09/04/2008
- I thought it was pretty good, could have flowed better.....
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- MATT-ELF-REAPER - 09/04/2008
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its just alittle broken hearted love peom i wrote i can write others i can write and ryhme about pretty much any subject
(NOT BRAGGING) - Report As Spam