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Beth C
i've never met you
but we speak alot
we both love music me and you
your style and personality totaly rocks
we both would draw, than go to school
but i love writing poems when i'm in the mood
we both have msn, it totaly rules
i give you an online hifive dude
you are my friend
and iloveyou as a mate
we have near trends
and you loveto paint
Hold Me
hold me until the suffering is gone
hold me while im all alone
hold me in the bright moon
hold me and show love tonight
hold me in your arms today
hold me until i am okay
hold me as i were to die
hold me as i sit here and cry
hold me whilst my tears stroll out of my eyes
hold me before i runnaway
hold me like you never have
hold me as we sit heer and chill
hold me as it has been a dream
something totaly make believe
hold me as i fade away
hold me in your life forever
for the rest of my life.
Love
someone you love has half of your feelings
when your sad there sad
when your happy there happy.
when your dead, they feel terible.
because the feelings you gave to someone else,
made her kill herself.
My Angel
I don't know you much
but i know you well
you look like an nurse angel
who's just come to sell,
me a new heart since i have none left,
i looked at the price,
and said who needs it,
she looked at me
and she said
i'm your gardian angel
what you feel i feel worse
i looked at her and said sorry
i don't know you much
but i know you well
you look like a nurse angel
whos just come from hell.
My Death Your Death
we are so close
yet so far
i want to talk
but you just stare
i write you letters
i write you notes
when will you notice
that i am here
passing you notes
you stare with fear
is ther something wrong
or is it just me
i pass you another note
and then you say;
my dad hates me,
my mums dead,
it was all good before i was sad,
i came here,
and got dumped by the one i love,
she thought i was cheating on her,
she said she knew about my secret girl,
i looked down,
and she left.
and know i'm here today,
i blame it all on you,
look up in the air as i kill you,
she looked up and closed her eyes,
and fell to the ground,
a note shutterd through the air,
iloveyou. so goodbye.
the note was covered in blood.
he thought what he had done,
to his secret girl,
afew days later,
on the news and everywhere,
the boy was dead, without a clue,
a note shuttered from the air;
i loveyouto. so goodbye.
RAZOR KISS
Something razor sharp,
kisses her skin,
everytime shes sad,
her life is ruined,
she accepts every razor kiss
one night she was sad,
the razor kissed her goodbye,
she saw blood dripping down her arm,
and sighlently said;
goodbye.
Different
your there with everyone
i'm just on my own
your singing happily
i sing alone
you find it easy
and i find it hard
to concintrate in class;
you being the class joker
i perfer to draw
and have my drawing confiscated
whilst your making everyone laugh
you sitting there laughing
i'd rather be quiet
you would not think at all
i'd think deeper than ever
you'd you to bed
i'll go to sleep
you'll wake up the next day,
and wonder if i'm there
whilst i'm still sleeping
forever
Your Lies
Everytime i see you,
you repeat the same words,
even though i love you,
it really dosn't work,
i know your hiding something,
i know i'm just for show,
i know you don't love me,
but thinking 'bout that, makes me feel low.
- Title: A Couple Of My Poems
- Artist: BethhBee-
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Description:
A couple of my poems.
I wrote :) - Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: couple poems
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Comments (2 Comments)
- hushley - 09/12/2008
- very nice, but I'm that kind of person who is practically a human spell-check.... *underlines words in red*
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- being a prince - 09/12/2008
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If you want multiple poems in arenas, put them in different submissions!
They're alright. Not really outstanding, though. 2/5 - Report As Spam