My Wondeland

• Artist: Namikikyo
• Description: I think I pissed at somthing, but anyways. I really like it and I hope that you guys do. I worked very hard and this and I hope to get some fans out there. I'll be making more if you guys don't mind, and I hope to hear from some of you <3
  
  [[p.s. I know it sounds alittle broken, but thats how I like it, I hope you guys do too]]
• Date: 09/13/2008
• Tags: wondeland nightmare world freak

Butterflies and purple cats

sugar coated dreams

nightmares that turn black

and skin torn at it's seams

Eyes fall from their sockets

to reveil a shimmering light

Rabbits steal from my pockets

only to gasp in fright

I don't fit in this world

neither this one nor the next

where people smile as thier lips curl

and others cut them at the neck

If only I could show you

my Wonderlandic dream

Then maybe I'll learn to get along

and silence their broken screams

Comments

[Kalawyn]

Though your wonderland sounds pretty twisted and literally cut throat, your poem has uses syntax and diction exceptionally well. I really like your poem. smile

[Spiffily-Enchanted]

:]
Nice xD

[trichodezia]

I think it's wonderful.