Now we go

• Artist: Drasheon
• Description: Not sure.
• Date: 09/29/2008
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Now we go
Into a land we don't know
Away from a world so low
That happiness is just for show

I will not stay here
In this world ruled by fear
I will not stop until I'm clear
Until this world is nowhere near

I will go to where the sun shines
Where there are plants of many kinds
To where we can free our minds
And create happiness in new times

Now we go
Into a land we don't know
Away from a world so low
That happiness is just for show

Comments

[Drasheon]

Thanks, it's awesome that people are still viewing this, and liking it. smile

[TheL0st1]

i agree with love requiem, very good technique and very good flow

[xLaydieSkullx]

this is really good i luv it so much good rymage biggrin 5/5


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[Love Requiem]

lovely. I am impressed that you were able to keep that rhyme pattern and keep the poem fluid.

[lilyankee812]

I liked how even though it had a "we need to get out of here" theme to it, you still had hope and happiness in the poem. Great job! 4/5 :]

[Drasheon]

Thanks! I appreciate it!

[papershelf i c i c l e s]

good. i like the slightly morbid feel of it, while it has the happy rhyme of a lovely poem. kudos.