fade away

• Artist: breakyaface
• Description: a poem i wrote when i was DEPRESED and i wrote it to let some steem off. tell me what you think an check out my other work if you like, i dont got spell check, so if you can read it hoep[ you enjoy.
• Date: 09/30/2008
• Tags: fade away death

"i dearm of flight
flight on brokin wings
to a place were we belong
a flight on brokin wings
were i can start again
with a brand new name
new "

burning tears
filed the mothers eyes
as she read this
blood pounding in here
body
splinters squeze there way into her knees
as she falls to the blood staind floor

"i grew tierd
tierd of the crupted thoughts
of all those who thought i was
an outcast,reject
i hope they will see now im not!
THEY WILL MISS IT!
IT WILL COME BACK AROUND
THEY WILL BE FACE DOWN IN THERE PALMS
then they will hear me say
had enough?
just like they did to me!"

sirens ringing
in the naborhood
kids watching out the windows
mothers and fathers
standing out front in there house coats
as the stretcher cares his smiling/bloody body
into the ambulince
as the car starts to creak forward
the body coughs,blood spat out
then the words
"am i flying"

"i was sick
sick of the remembrinc of the facts
were still sitting on the ground
no matter how far technolegy may go
as i fly away
they will think
there gose the emo kid
the kid noone cares about
now who we ganna beat up?
you will see
that i am free
and you all will never be"

as the I.V runs into my body
mothers crying beside the bed
the kids are laughing
the cops are looking for those kids
the doctors saying i dont got much of a chance
my mother cryes louder and harder
i twitch
grab the I.V and pull it out
the doctors gasp
my mom looks consernd
and i say
"let me fly
its ok
i will be free"

"by the end of this note i will be in the E.R
i'd like to say sorry
sorry to you mom for herting you
im sorry to the kids that i wasent like you
and im sorry i wasent happy
so befor you try to kep me alive
just let me fade away to a place i belong
i love you"

less then 5 minets after she fineshd the letter i died
it was the most relaxing thing i ever felt
there was so much silence as i faded away
i am happy now
i hope you can read this to know
but im happy
im a
fade away

Comments

[ThePuffinMaster]

Oh my goodness,that was amazing...I wish i had your willpower to write somthing like that...I mean...Wow. Great Job. biggrin

[xXHARMONIC blADE Xx]

well written

[G R i M R A P 3 R]

okay i think this one is my favorite. i really like the wording and how you used quotes. " these things " lol. biggrin when i read it i made sure i felt how the main character felt cause i always do that. at the end i was relieved, it was funny. whee