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Love is like glass
Beautiful while it lasts
But hurts when it is broken
Love is like treasure
Priceless beyond measure
But was never meant to be found
Love is like the sky
And everyone wants to fly
But we all need help to soar.
- by Jeff Labbe is single |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: Jeff Labbe is single
- Description: My first poem i wrote. i believe i was 15 at the time. i gave it a title now, everyone said it fit. idk, i think it's generic, but what ever.
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: unnamed poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xox_Cherry_Babe_xox - 09/03/2009
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Good poem.
Its cute but its deep and if this was your first poem i would love to read more. - Report As Spam
- HoRnEd_SpiRiT - 10/04/2008
- This is my toher account. i hated my name on the other one, and it wont change. so all entries will now be from this one.
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- The Original Waffle - 10/04/2008
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I love how poetic it is.
Very good! ESPECIALLY for your first one! - Report As Spam
- KekeKira - 10/04/2008
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aww that was soo cute!! ^o^
lol sry if that wasnt the type of thing u wanna hear ^^" - Report As Spam
- Jeff Labbe is single - 10/04/2008
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jtlyk, the rhyme scheme isnt off. its:
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- ttpp_tori_stori - 10/04/2008
- Cute poem! I like the third line the best. *D
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- Yutora - 10/04/2008
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yes 'love' would indeed fit ^-^
itsa really nice poem. - Report As Spam
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