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i look out side my window
locked inside my room
they keep me inside here
from seeing u
not looking for another
i long for your touch
thinkin that one day
i feel ur kiss and touch
they dont let me out
im stuck in this room
left to my thoughts
left to remeber u
now ive given up
u havent even tried
so now i sit up here
with tears in my eyes
i knew i was a fool
but i was in love
and now ill give in
and marry someone i dont love
- by ruby_angelqueen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: Waiting for my love
- Artist: ruby_angelqueen
- Description: someone waiting for their lover to come and they dont
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: waiting love
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Comments (1 Comments)
- gogopinkranger - 10/13/2008
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its good, but the chatspeak really throws it off. also, you rhymed "love" with itself on the last stanza. more importantly though, its a tad bit average. find something to make your writing individual!
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