Puppet In Shadows

• Artist: Reap The Halls
• Description: a dark poem like an edgar allen poe type of poem. this is not a poem for everyone, but i hope you will like it just the same.
• Date: 10/13/2008
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Puppet in shadows

Attached to thick strings,
I'm forced to move around,
Pulled by my hair,
I make pained sounds.

Invisible master,
Whom no one can see,
Someone in shadows controlling me.

You move me with your tainted strings,
You torture me until I scream,
I'm moved around by every limb,
I have no soul I'm lost within.

My shattered mind unfixable,
My lost time untraceable,
My life controlled, my every move,
My mind and body are not in tune.

Forced to submit to society,
I'm pushed to losing my identity,
Everything is the same,
Nothing is allowed to change.

I'm a puppet on a string,
Every time I'm pulled it stings,
My mind will never be at rest,
I am not one of the blessed.

Comments

[Reap The Halls]

thanx

[lil-squid]

hey friend, you didn't tell me you were entering your poems in the arena *shakes finger at you* XD
good job, you have done an excellent job in conveying the feelings expressed in the poem to the reader, i feel it every time i read it =(

[5_LuULuU_5]

wow i love the topic and how good you described it and also you did a good job on matching i'll give you a 5 for it.

[peridot pup]

the beat is really good, it really gives the effect of being jerked around.
Awesome work.

[ill butter ur muffin]

:3 i luv this poem. nice style.