im not giving it away

• Artist: mexicantacos2003
• Description: title: mixed expressions expressed in mixed up expressions
  
  i dont like how people "describe" their writings about a poem because it forces you to look in that perspective. that is why my poems dont have descriptions. they were made to inspire, to provoke thinking, and to piss people off.
  
  im not doing a good job of it.
  
  (but since i do have a description for this then im contradictory)
  
  i wrote this after i asked a very special friend to be mine.
  she was already somebody elses.
• Date: 10/14/2008
• Tags: random wierd different love

ok so i was too late for it all.

i had a fall

can i get up?

i can.

i dont want to.

oh well.

it just wasnt meant to be.

so i have to move on up.

i have to see it personally but i know i have to move on.

but i just wont admit the truth when it is hitting me on the face.

how lame.

i feel lame

everybody is lame

i am lame. no im not im just late

oof.

that hurt

it really did.

i hope it will heal

nah i dont really mean it

oh well too bad so sad

i fell and i cant get up

and she wont help

she wont help at all

she is like a splinter

making any movement hurts worse

so ill just stay in the shape im in to see

see what?

i dont know

and i dont care

and i want to care

but the blew from the fall





it really hurt

Comments

[mexicantacos2003]

i looked it up.
yes but my poem is very amature-ish compared to his.
dam

[Celsaeus]

This style reminds mre of a poem by Kenneth Patchen called The Slums. I love this poem. look up mine. It's caled Saturday Mournings.

[mexicantacos2003]

thank you

[bunnyluv3r-x3]

nyaaa!!! its so good!!!