fallen angel

• Artist: moonlight loner
• Description: i wrote this when i was depressed as i had just lost my love of my life. but i knew i would move on. this poem inspired me to soar above my loss to move on living. i dont know why but it really has helped me alot. this poem i wrote took about 2 hours just to get what i wanted into it. hope you enjoy it
• Date: 10/15/2008
• Tags: fallen angel

Fallen Angel

found you broken on the ground
And from your mouth a bitter sound
That became sweeter as I approached
You in your deepest agony

I put you up and raised you well
And more than stories ever tell
I feel in love with you those days
And hoped that you would too

You've been a fallen angel
Ripped out of the sky
But as your wings grew strong enough
You left me - behind to die

We built up a own world together
For our future I assumed
I believed in what you said that day
But was already doomed

The more you've learned and grown
The less you cared for me
But I was too blinded by my feelings
To see the dawning agony

"I love you more than I can say
And we will never part"
You told me nearly every day
But still you broke my heart

As soon as you could fly again
Into the open sky
You left me without any reason
Back on this world to die

Comments

[redneckhuntinbud]

very deep and thoughtful... I wouldn't expect anything less from u tho.. biggrin

[Kaoiji TM]

Very good, i'd have a reply to this but im too lazy to write atm if that makes sense lol, Very good none the less 5/5

[Victoria Elwatts]

I think this a well put together poem.
You did a good job, I am very impressed.