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Lost Tome
Is there a single point in which one loses self. The self lost has yet to be missed until it is needed. If the memories have made you lose self, then will losing the memories bring back self. If so, at what cost are you willing to lose what you do not want to gain what you no longer have. Will you have lost the thing that makes you, you. Without pain there is only nothing, and from that nothing becomes the darkness that is the heart.
- by Dark_Gale017 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/17/2008 |
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- Title: Lost Tome
- Artist: Dark_Gale017
- Description: Ummm well I don't know where it came from I just started writting and this popped out.
- Date: 10/17/2008
- Tags: lost tome
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Comments (4 Comments)
- freaky kitty1 - 10/21/2008
- tha'ts amazing! i deffinately loved this one! going into my favorites!
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- Efface - 10/18/2008
- This is a very deep piece of literature. I feel that if you apply some sort of form to it and add in some question marks where there are questions, it will be a true work of poetic art. Excellent subject as well.
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- dizzy_otaku - 10/18/2008
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pretty good. its very profound to me. however the ending lost me. its not that i didn't understand it i just felt it didn't fit. you made a point but... uhh... idk. different style from mine. i liked it though. :] made me think.
btw watch "Endless Sunshine of a Spotless Mind". It has themes relating to lost memory, love, and the importance of those sort of things. uhh... i thought it was good. - Report As Spam
- XxPlushxX - 10/18/2008
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thats good=)
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