Emptyness

• Artist: 666Datenshi666
• Description: idk
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: boredom

Split my skin, ******** my wounds, desecrate the inner sanctum in witch i hide,drag me through the mud,blind my whitening eyes so that i may see darkness in a tunnel of light, pain i cannot deny as i rot in this empty shell
swamped in disaffection,introducing my newborn hell.
I never mourn i never look back, as long as thy phosporic ray's grant me more pleasure then pain, I who is evil cannot recieve good so i still grave i'm yearning for thy healing touch of grace........

Comments

[iluvpolkadots]

Alrighty. *rolls up sleeves* Grammatical error; there, there there, there, there and there...and a bunch in that general area. I like this...though "emptiness" isnt what I would title this, you speak of pain and pleasure...That is much more than being empty...and what was the ******'s supposed to be?

[Teayo]

I can sense the anger in this one you should have called it something else because the heat of it is intense very well done the format could have been a little different though