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I walk, and talk, but no one hears
its almost if they dont have ears,
I sing and dance and jump around,
but all they do is look at the ground.
All I want is someone to notice me,
watch me buzz around like a bee,
I should just spread my wings and fly,
but I don't want to say goodbye.
Its wintertime, and it is cold,
I would go somewhere warm, but I'm not bold,
so I stay here by this tree,
and let sweet dreams wash over me.
I open my eyes and see white,
so I look around in fright,
I see clouds, and a Gate,
and I think, 'So this was my Fate'.
- by Narumi Koshiba |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: Notice Me
- Artist: Narumi Koshiba
- Description: this is about a ghost of a girl who didnt want to leave Earth, so when she went to "Sleep", an Angel came and took her to heaven. And it was then that she accepted her Fate.
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: notice angel ghost
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Comments (4 Comments)
- lzbth2011 - 10/19/2008
- I really liked it! I hope to read more of ur poems.
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 10/19/2008
- LAME! i was into it but the ending was terrible. 2/5
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- Shimmering Corruption - 10/19/2008
- i like it a lot. you are a good writer ^_^
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- sezuko - 10/19/2008
- its really nice and heavenly
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