i love you to death

• Artist: XxFallen_CrowxX
• Description: this is about a couple who loved each other but the boy did a sad death in front of his girlfriend.
  and the girl lives in misery for many years. her memory of him haunts her and then she commits suicide
• Date: 10/21/2008
• Tags: love death

Lying awake i think of you
wishing this wasn't true
the black hooded man haunts me
waiting for me
wishing you'd be here with me
to protect me from my fears
to wipe away my tears
but you left me with a final kiss
a final hug
and a sweet goodbye
when you walked away i broke into many peices
i tried to hide my worry
my pain
my fear of you leaving
i wish this was a nightmare i'd awake from
i tell myself everything will be alright
a single tear stains my cheek
screaming into the night i wih i was with you
he haunts my dreams
his sythe swinging towards me
screaming but no sound
you lie there
no pulse
no heart beat
no tears of pain come to your eyes
i run into the horizon
as the haunting memories follows
i try to tell myself you're still here
but i know that isn't true
falling to the ground
gun in hand
suicide
my last resort
to be with you
i love you to death

Comments

[Kurokawa Haru]

this is really good, i like it smile inspiring, 5/5

[pretty300]

i agree with shezacutle it was very deep and your message...

very good

[Krystal238]

this is really good,
have you read the twilight series? if you ahve then it kind of reminds me of "new moon"
idk how, but if you havent then dont bother reading that part razz

very good job smile

[shezacutie]

this is very deep.
but you did a good job
at expressing the feelings you were trying to get across.