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When the sky turn into a dim
Embrellas sprout from the ground
A girl walks around oh so slim
As a brak came from a hound
As the dim sky starts to darken
The girl start to run on home
And the ran drops start to sharpen
To see a man on a dome
While the rain start to pour stronger
The man slips onto the ground
As the neighbours start to holler
To find the man on a hound
As the rain wash the blood away
The media went on live
And the neighbours began to sway
Since the man had a few wive
When the sky turn from dim to blue
A coffin was set in place
While the police find a clue
Because the man had no face
- by EhItsPhong |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/22/2008 |
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- Title: Psalm of Rain
- Artist: EhItsPhong
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Description:
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Narni wanted me to post this so... I'm posting it... Actually she just wanted to read it....
Prob. stronger and holler doesn't rhymn but oh well. - Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: psalm rain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- meizha - 03/28/2009
- Well there's a story... but the misspellings and wrong grammar are quite disturbing. Hope you edit this.
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- EhItsPhong - 10/22/2008
- Yeah, I like this one better to since I made this under pressure. Afterall the 3rd period bell was gonna ring soon and all my classes are 3-4 minutes walk away.
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- pinkdoggie7 - 10/22/2008
- i like this one better than your other rain one
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- NarniNarNar - 10/22/2008
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^-^ I love it!!!
Thank you so much for posting it for me! - Report As Spam
- Tasogare Megami - 10/22/2008
- ur poem is SOOO good! i liked it very much! 3nodding
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