Not A Goodbye

• Artist: DecafKitten
• Description: I wrote this in class when I got bored. My friend was bugging me about writing depressing stuff all the time so I wrote sort of a love song. Please comment.
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: goodbye

Not A Goodbye

That song plays,
Over and over,
In my head.

It tears me apart,
As I lay here,
Looking up at the stars,
Dreaming of you beside me.

Supposed to be a forever,
Not a goodbye,
When I poured my heart out,
Onto this faded script,
Into this fateful words.

Who would've known,
Who could've guessed,
The way our paths would turn......

A fork in the road,
Which way to turn,
One wrong choice,
A troubled decision,
Now you are gone.

Supposed to be a forever,
Not a goodbye,
As I sat there and wept,
The slam of the door,
Still echoing throughout my soul.

I try to stand,
Against my pain,
But I still crumble,
Falling to the ground.

I wear my feelings on my sleeve,
Can't keep them from you,
This isn't over yet,
This can not be,
A goodbye......

Comments

[omgitzmariel]

Awesome!

[lkjhxfhdjyfglhbgfjhgdj]

ok so i absolutly love it and i think is is soooooooo good 5/5

[Spontaneously Spazgasmic]

That was beautiful. You have a talent! =]

[hebba-kitty]

wow thats so good
you just cry reeding this

[ii_GlORiA]

whoa i just cried when i read that that is so deep it isnt a bad thing to write depressing stories i agree thats all i can write theres barely anything good in my life so yeah it was a fantastic poem

[myshatteredlittleheart]

very heart felt.writing depresing poems isnt always a bad thing eather.that just means that the writing you happen to think of in your mind is sad,and sometimes deppresing writing can be the best kind of writing because it is such a powerfull emotion and it translates into powerfull writing.i tend to write a lot of sad things too,so ur not alone .i have one posting on the writing arena here and its very sad.more people do that then you would actually think(write mostly sad stories/poems)