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as a child i saw life as full of fun and games.
playdates, afternoons at the park.
all fun.
one day my mother called me in for dinner.
when i went to cross the street,
it hit me.
all my childhood had been crushed.
i layed there motionless.
pain and fear running through me.
then,
everything goes dark...
i woke up to find myself surrounded by people.
all sorts of tubes and wires attached to my body.
mother and father, crying like the pouring rain.
then,
again everything goes dark...
i hear nothing
see nothing
feel nothing,
except the life being pulled out of me.
they tried everything they could.
but i was gone.
- by katieann10 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/25/2008 |
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- Title: i was gone
- Artist: katieann10
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Description:
its mainly about a little girl who is hit by a car and dies.
it symbolizes how i felt when 'he' broke my heart. i felt like he killed me. like a "hit and run accident". - Date: 10/25/2008
- Tags: gone died death child
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sennavi - 04/08/2009
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nice poem...
tragedy in words is souless...
good job biggrin - Report As Spam
- shockcollar - 10/25/2008
- not even remotely like apoem
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