Sweet Silent and Lovely Loud

• Artist: Lolli-x-Poppi
• Description: I whipped this poem up pretty quickly. It's about two twins who are always together and pretty much polar opposites personality-wise, as you can tell by the nicknames I've given them for this piece; "Silent" and "Loud". Since they're both so different, whenever one benefits, the other loses an oppurtunity, and they feel bad for that so they split up, although they'll always be twins.
  
  First arena entry ever. Please rate/comment. Constructive criticism muchly appreciated, but flames aren't. c=
• Date: 10/29/2008
• Tags: silent loud twins opposite sisters

Sweet Silent is sitting,
with darling Lovely Loud.
They're discussing things together,
Before their thoughts might shroud.

Silent's sitting quieter
than she ever has before.
Loud, holding back her tears,
Smiles at her once more.

Two and fro, two and fro.
Longing for change,
And making it so.

Opposites attract,
They don't start out together.
Maybe that's why they're quitting now,
Although they're still forever.

So Sweet Silent was sitting
with darling Lovely Loud.
Now she's standing up, to
make her way through the crowd.

Two and fro, two and fro.
Linking arms once more,
Until she lets go.

Comments

[airwonder]

i loved it. you should keep doing things like that.

[ChronicOvadose]

It's pretty good. It would be perfect for a song... if only I knew how to play my guitar >_>

[TotalWeirdo]

This piece is pretty bittersweet to me. It's good to me though. Sorry I don't have any advice. ^^"