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silent and gone
quiet and peaceful
like air or not?
sitting on the ground
not talking not breathing
it's just a rock
thare on the ground
- Title: silent
- Artist: nocan11
- Description: i just wrote what the envirement was like and it sounded pretty good hope you like it thx
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: silent
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Comments (7 Comments)
- phic - 05/04/2010
- a poam dosn't need to be long to get a point across. your spelling could use some work. but i like it so a 4
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- Electric Cassie - 10/30/2008
- Umm...Its okay. :] You could have done much better though.
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- M A C A B R E M I ME - 10/29/2008
- You could work on it a little. Maybe put some more effort into it.
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- Lex2442 - 10/29/2008
- i tihnk you could have put of effort into that one.... like... its terrible..... im sorry.. but are you liek a 7 year old?
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- _S3XY-B3AUTY_ - 10/29/2008
- hi and no im not thesecretellingoldfish
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- airwonder - 10/29/2008
- Your poem silent is so peaceful i think. I just loved it.
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- Vanillady - 10/29/2008
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You misspelled a lot of words.
You need to practice.
2 out of 5 - Report As Spam
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