If I just had the time.

• Artist: Sensitive Rainbow
• Description: I've been writing some poems but just sometimes you'd wish to share one with others if it has some meaning to you. Well since I'm sharing now, why not rate me and share a comment too. ;D
  
  This poem that I've wrote has a special meaning to me. Since once a very important person died at night because some drunkard didn't know how to drive. If he just didn't had to go outside. He'll be just standing next to me.
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: just time

If I just had the time,
to say goodbye.

If I just had the time,
to wonder why.

If I just had the time,
to figure it out.

If I just had the time,
to help him out.

If I just had the time,
to tell him about.

If I just had the time,
to love him more.

If I just had the time,
to squeeze him once more.

If I just had the time,
to see his eyes.

If I just had the time,
Then I'd never had to tell him goodbye.

Comments

[duke ferdinand falls]

work through that last line
try saying it with the contraction separated and see if it still makes sense
if it doesn't, edit it

[Sensitive Rainbow]

Oh why thank you. <3

[Tetsugen]

I wish I had more time to tell you about how excellent this poem was. It's no wonder its one of the most popular poems. Keep up the great work Sensitive. I expect great things for you in the future. 10/10!