Final choice

• Artist: Tatsu_269
• Description: every ones thought of suicide, its human nature, i wrote this when i was in that place. felt better after, lol.
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: suicide razor death morbid pain

Looking for a way to die,
I found my form in ropes and knives,
a silver razor that I claimed,
this sturdy rope would hold my frame.
im ready now to start the show,
keep eyes on me, it wont be slow.
I’ll slide the blade across my vains.
dig it deep,
to feel the pain.
as blood runs freely from my wrists
I’ll make sure the noose head fits,
then around my neck this rope runs tight
I do this now,
ive lost all fight.
watch me dangle,
as im set free,
see what you people have done to me?

Comments

[shinitai666]

Wow. Good job. Don't die.

[Man Made Monstrosity]

I used to feel like this.
But i got through it
with all the help from my family and friends
im giving this 5/5 because it is beautiful

[THEMASTERDANTE14]

ok

[XxxSexGoddess411xxX]

i thought tht was truley poetic and deep...i like it in some way i can see why people would lash out in suicide and yea ive thought about but it'll get better i know it will